Date: 2010-03-04 08:45 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thelake.livejournal.com
it was too generic. I felt like I knew the next line in every scene.
and I honestly couldn't understand who was who for at least half an hour.

the dynamic in bros & sis is a lot more natural, you should really give it a shot. And they have Sally Field as the mom, so it's automatic win.
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